The thing I most took away from the intensive review was that I am not making my argument in a coherent method. I have been focusing tightly on "making buildings" rather than on proving or disproving my statement.
With that in mind I am going to step back and try and re(organize) my project and put some coherence to the argument.
Or as Tom suggested: Put an outline of the slides that I wish I had for last Sunday:
- Problem Statement (Abstract)
- Disconnected Site
- Disconnected People
- Disconnected Site
- Thesis Statement
- The two disconnections can be framed using architecture to reconnect the area and the people to the larger community and city
- The two disconnections can be framed using architecture to reconnect the area and the people to the larger community and city
- Methods of Inquiry
- Documentation of Franklinton as enclave
- Historical nature of settlement
- Political boundary in Virginia Military District
- Early Settlement
- Early Settlement
- Flooding
- Freeway & Rail
- Research of Refugees
- CRIS as a prototype organization
- CRIS as a prototype organization
- Examination of temporal nature of site / place as a way to root into site
- Phenomenology as a link to place specific
- Phenomenology as a link to place specific
- Transit
- Light rail examples and transit oriented development
- Light rail examples and transit oriented development
- Site Analysis
- Franklinton Large Scale Analysis
- Landmarks
- Transportation
- Arrival and departure on neighborhood scale
- City Scale buildings
- Cosi
- Vets Memorial
- Mt Caramel Hospital
- Missing services
- Grocery is absent
- Small commercial is absent
- Walkable defined area is absent
- Small scale health clinic as outreach would be helpful
- No branch library
- This is present in West Franklinton but could be augmented
- This is present in West Franklinton but could be augmented
- Grocery is absent
- Cosi
- Landmarks
- Mid Scale Analysis
- Neighborhood Character
- Fabric of surrounding buildings
- Size and scale
- Materials
- Size and scale
- Multifamily / single family mix
- Warehousing
- Automotive lots
- Sales
- parking
- Sales
- Small scale Civic buildings
- Elementary School
- Churches
- Parks & Recreation Centers
- Elementary School
- Spaghetti Warehouse
- Site Specific Characteristics
- Site Views
- Site surroundings
- Potential links for connection
- Rail
- road
- Rail
- Site Views
- Design Narrative
- Goal of economic integration
- Transit as an offering of inverted commuting
- Transit as an offering of inverted commuting
- Goal of transit as link to larger community
- Goal of community integration
- Goal of education / accultuarion services
- Goal of proximity co-housing as a way to foster acculturation.
- How to make permanence out of transience.
- Use of vacant sites as homesteading opportunities.
- Use of vacant sites as homesteading opportunities.
- Design Process
- Sketch Problem
- Trying to combine civic, cultural & community into singular building didn't work
- Trying to combine civic, cultural & community into singular building didn't work
- Programming Diagram
- How many people on site
- How many people from community
- What are essential activities of acculturation process
- What are methods of connection to neighborhood
- How many people from community
- Community-Cultural
- Residential CoHousing as a strategy
- Over commercial start up space
- Over commercial start up space
- Market as temporal space
- Opportunity for economic reciprocation
- Opportunity for economic reciprocation
- Site Plan and strategy
- Plans
- Sections
- Perspectives
- materials
- Plans
- Commercial-cultural
- Plans
- Sections
- Perspectives
- Structure
- materials
- mechanical strategy
- Plans
- Market-Grocery
- Plans
- Sections
- Perspectives
- Structure
- materials
- mechanical strategy
- Plans
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